Media Product Evaluation

Film Opening, Final Product

Film Opening First Draft

This is the first draft of our final media product. We felt that there were still many things that needed adjusting and adding to this piece, for example we needed to add the credits of producers, writers and directors. We also felt that the repeated title screen of 'The Recall' was not conventional for a film and needed to be taken out. We thought the ending of this draft needed adjusting and we could possibly add in a twist that shows the injured young girl being found. This way, we would make it look as if it was leading into the rest of the film and would captivate people into watching it. We also felt that the product needed lengthening to be more conventional and so should maybe include more flashbacks and more dancing.